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		<title>By: t. sterling</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforward.com/better-writing/better-writing-critiques-and-feedback/comment-page-1#comment-39435</link>
		<dc:creator>t. sterling</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Jul 2010 13:40:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think I may try that. I think also what I was trying to practice working on a deadline, especially with my Friday posts. I wanted to be consistent with content and sometimes if I&#039;m rushing it, it won&#039;t come out as good as something I took my time with and enjoyed writing about... like my LOST reflections (wink wink). I actually do have a deadline with my job&#039;s newsletter, but they are usually only looking for a movie review. But I would rather take my time, proofread and edit as needed versus write it in the nick of time. However, I have 24 hours to write about my experience in Niagara Falls, but the version I send to them will be abridged compared to what will eventually make it on my blog.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think I may try that. I think also what I was trying to practice working on a deadline, especially with my Friday posts. I wanted to be consistent with content and sometimes if I&#8217;m rushing it, it won&#8217;t come out as good as something I took my time with and enjoyed writing about&#8230; like my LOST reflections (wink wink). I actually do have a deadline with my job&#8217;s newsletter, but they are usually only looking for a movie review. But I would rather take my time, proofread and edit as needed versus write it in the nick of time. However, I have 24 hours to write about my experience in Niagara Falls, but the version I send to them will be abridged compared to what will eventually make it on my blog.</p>
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		<title>By: Melissa Donovan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melissa Donovan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Jul 2010 06:09:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s the truth! If you hold onto a piece long enough, you&#039;ll always find more revisions. And more, and more, and more. At some point, you just have to let it go.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s the truth! If you hold onto a piece long enough, you&#8217;ll always find more revisions. And more, and more, and more. At some point, you just have to let it go.</p>
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		<title>By: Melissa Donovan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melissa Donovan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Jul 2010 06:01:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sometimes when you commit yourself to a hobby, it starts to feel like work. For example, if you love writing and launch a blog, eventually the commitment makes it feel like a job. I know I&#039;ve experienced it a few times. The trick, I think, is to work through the periods of time when it feels like work. Usually, it&#039;s just a bump in the road and when you push yourself over it, the thing becomes fun again. Sometimes scaling back on the commitment can help. If you were blogging three times a week, bring it down to once a week for awhile and see if you don&#039;t get your drive back. Experiment and see what works.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sometimes when you commit yourself to a hobby, it starts to feel like work. For example, if you love writing and launch a blog, eventually the commitment makes it feel like a job. I know I&#8217;ve experienced it a few times. The trick, I think, is to work through the periods of time when it feels like work. Usually, it&#8217;s just a bump in the road and when you push yourself over it, the thing becomes fun again. Sometimes scaling back on the commitment can help. If you were blogging three times a week, bring it down to once a week for awhile and see if you don&#8217;t get your drive back. Experiment and see what works.</p>
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		<title>By: CommDiscussion</title>
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		<dc:creator>CommDiscussion</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Jul 2010 15:00:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>For me, writing is an extremely painful process. It takes a long time and I have to go through many revisions and approvals. I think you&#039;ve listed some great points, but I would also caution that writing is never done, it&#039;s simply abandoned at some point. In other words, you can always keep making improvements, but at some point and time you have to meet your deadline.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For me, writing is an extremely painful process. It takes a long time and I have to go through many revisions and approvals. I think you&#8217;ve listed some great points, but I would also caution that writing is never done, it&#8217;s simply abandoned at some point. In other words, you can always keep making improvements, but at some point and time you have to meet your deadline.</p>
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		<title>By: t. sterling</title>
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		<dc:creator>t. sterling</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Jul 2010 03:25:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have my mom proofread a lot of what I write. I asked her a couple times to critique things, but like you said, moms will always say what you did was awesome and will always be your #1 fan.

However, I find myself like Friar was describing in his comments, being drained by the time I get out of work and not really wanting to work on anything creative. I don&#039;t even get to read the blogs I enjoy so much anymore, but when I can the chance, I do. Sometimes writing in my own blog feels like a burden, which it shouldn&#039;t because I enjoy doing it, but I don&#039;t like having a bunch of days pass without posting anything new. Even if it&#039;s just a movie review.

Even with all that busy-ness, I see what you mean about reading all the time. I managed to at least start a few books here and there and it only feeds the writer in me. I admit, I thought I could cheat and get away with watching movies or well scripted entertainment, but there&#039;s nothing quite like a book. My only problem now is FINISHING a book. I&#039;m about 20-50 pages in about 6 books.

Lastly, I have a few friends that have asked me to critique their writing, and I told them I&#039;d be glad to. I feel bad because I have yet to read a single word. But they also know I can get pretty busy.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have my mom proofread a lot of what I write. I asked her a couple times to critique things, but like you said, moms will always say what you did was awesome and will always be your #1 fan.</p>
<p>However, I find myself like Friar was describing in his comments, being drained by the time I get out of work and not really wanting to work on anything creative. I don&#8217;t even get to read the blogs I enjoy so much anymore, but when I can the chance, I do. Sometimes writing in my own blog feels like a burden, which it shouldn&#8217;t because I enjoy doing it, but I don&#8217;t like having a bunch of days pass without posting anything new. Even if it&#8217;s just a movie review.</p>
<p>Even with all that busy-ness, I see what you mean about reading all the time. I managed to at least start a few books here and there and it only feeds the writer in me. I admit, I thought I could cheat and get away with watching movies or well scripted entertainment, but there&#8217;s nothing quite like a book. My only problem now is FINISHING a book. I&#8217;m about 20-50 pages in about 6 books.</p>
<p>Lastly, I have a few friends that have asked me to critique their writing, and I told them I&#8217;d be glad to. I feel bad because I have yet to read a single word. But they also know I can get pretty busy.</p>
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