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		<title>By: Melissa Donovan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melissa Donovan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2009 21:35:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Renee! Critiques have helped my writing immensely. Actually, because of all the writing critiques I&#039;ve received, I feel I&#039;m better able to absorb any kind of critique. In addition to improving your writing, critiques help you build thicker skin, which is an added benefit.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Renee! Critiques have helped my writing immensely. Actually, because of all the writing critiques I&#8217;ve received, I feel I&#8217;m better able to absorb any kind of critique. In addition to improving your writing, critiques help you build thicker skin, which is an added benefit.</p>
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		<title>By: Renee Otis</title>
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		<dc:creator>Renee Otis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2009 11:28:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wonderful article! We had a rousing discussion Sunday on AgentQuery about this very topic. Your insights were spot-on! Many thanks from your newest fan. I shall incorporate these guidelines into my own critiques.

Cheers,

~Rey</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wonderful article! We had a rousing discussion Sunday on AgentQuery about this very topic. Your insights were spot-on! Many thanks from your newest fan. I shall incorporate these guidelines into my own critiques.</p>
<p>Cheers,</p>
<p>~Rey</p>
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		<title>By: Deb</title>
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		<dc:creator>Deb</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Feb 2008 16:55:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great tips, I always want to give a good critique. Now i now how to do it properly.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great tips, I always want to give a good critique. Now i now how to do it properly.</p>
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		<title>By: Michele</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michele</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Feb 2008 01:11:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great tips on critiquing, Melissa. One can find themselves in a heap of trouble if they say anything about someone&#039;s work. It can become really heated at writer&#039;s groups. ;-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great tips on critiquing, Melissa. One can find themselves in a heap of trouble if they say anything about someone&#8217;s work. It can become really heated at writer&#8217;s groups. <img src='http://www.writingforward.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Deb</title>
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		<dc:creator>Deb</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Feb 2008 22:28:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I will definitely be using the information in this post a lot.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I will definitely be using the information in this post a lot.</p>
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		<title>By: Melissa Donovan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melissa Donovan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Feb 2008 22:20:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Jaden, And I am your student in life and how to live it. You, of course, have been the most supportive and encouraging person for all my crazy dreams. *hugs*

@Manictastic, Thanks, I&#039;m glad you liked it :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Jaden, And I am your student in life and how to live it. You, of course, have been the most supportive and encouraging person for all my crazy dreams. *hugs*</p>
<p>@Manictastic, Thanks, I&#8217;m glad you liked it <img src='http://www.writingforward.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Manictastic</title>
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		<dc:creator>Manictastic</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Feb 2008 12:24:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There are some good points in here on how to critize a friend/writer. I enjoyed the read.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There are some good points in here on how to critize a friend/writer. I enjoyed the read.</p>
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		<title>By: another good description of participation in peer critique &#171;</title>
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		<dc:creator>another good description of participation in peer critique &#171;</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Feb 2008 05:07:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] wanted to draw your attention to a post on melissa donovan&#8217;s blog (writing forward) about participating in peer critique. she writes in a really light-hearted, clear way about what to do and what to avoid. (you may [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] wanted to draw your attention to a post on melissa donovan&#8217;s blog (writing forward) about participating in peer critique. she writes in a really light-hearted, clear way about what to do and what to avoid. (you may [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Jaden</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jaden</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Feb 2008 02:50:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good points. Very well written. I must tell everyone that Melissa is always thoughtful and sensitive with her feedback. I am forever her student in this area.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good points. Very well written. I must tell everyone that Melissa is always thoughtful and sensitive with her feedback. I am forever her student in this area.</p>
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		<title>By: Melissa Donovan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melissa Donovan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Feb 2008 21:16:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>James, Oh yes, always critique the writing, not the writer... I might just go in and edit this to include that bit of advice.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>James, Oh yes, always critique the writing, not the writer&#8230; I might just go in and edit this to include that bit of advice.</p>
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		<title>By: James Chartrand - Men with Pens</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Chartrand - Men with Pens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Feb 2008 13:40:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll add a tip:  When offering feedback, avoid &quot;you&quot; statements.  

Here&#039;s an example:

You did this. You did that. You shouldn&#039;t do those things, because you will blah blah blah. You should do this instead.

Ugh. I feel personally knocked and beaten about. Try this version:

The writing is like this. The text sounds like that. It may be a better idea to avoid these things, because the content will. I suggest this technique so that YOU (it&#039;s okay here) can achieve this, this and this benefit.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll add a tip:  When offering feedback, avoid &#8220;you&#8221; statements.  </p>
<p>Here&#8217;s an example:</p>
<p>You did this. You did that. You shouldn&#8217;t do those things, because you will blah blah blah. You should do this instead.</p>
<p>Ugh. I feel personally knocked and beaten about. Try this version:</p>
<p>The writing is like this. The text sounds like that. It may be a better idea to avoid these things, because the content will. I suggest this technique so that YOU (it&#8217;s okay here) can achieve this, this and this benefit.</p>
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