How to Engage Readers with Emotionally Charged Writing

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In fiction and poetry, one of the greatest skills that a writer can possess is the ability to make the reader feel. If you can engage readers on an emotional level, you’ll have them hooked.

Think about it. Most of the books, poems, movies, and TV shows that you love best are the ones with which you forged an emotional connection. You felt like the characters were your friends, so you felt for them. You felt with them.

Sounds easy, but emotionally effective writing can be a complex and difficult endeavor. Let’s look at a few simple guidelines you can use to produce emotionally compelling creative writing.

Rules of the Road

To engage a reader, we have to create scenes that are so vivid they seem real, even if they are not. Through scenes, imagery, and dialogue, writers can emotionally engage readers with what’s happening on the page:

Show, Don’t Tell

The best writing shows readers what’s going on instead of telling them. If a character is sad, you don’t write, Kate was sad. You write, Kate lowered her eyes and swallowed hard, choking back a sob and blinking away the tears that were welling up in her eyes.

Use Imagery

Using imagery goes hand in hand with showing rather than telling. Instead of writing something like Jack’s heart was broken, use a compelling image to show the reader that Jack has a broken heart: Jack stood in the street with his hands clenched at his sides, and he watched her walk away. She didn’t care anymore. His entire body shook as tears streamed down his face. She had betrayed him and now he was all alone. It was over.

Try Dialogue

Feelings can be revealed through dialogue, and dialogue¬†can also incorporate imagery. When you use imagery and dialogue¬†together to show (rather than tell) the reader what is happening and to reveal the emotional aspect of the situation, the reader visualizes the action and becomes a part of it, often experiencing the characters’ emotions right along with them:

“Jack, stop talking. I’m not going with you,” Kate said.

“What do you mean you’re not going with me? We’re supposed to go together.”

“We’re not together, Jack. We were, but not anymore.”

Jack couldn’t believe his ears. “You’re leaving me?” he asked.

“That’s right,” she said. “You and me — it would never work.” She started to turn and paused briefly. Jack thought she had changed her mind. He saw her hand flicker, and for an instant, he knew she was about to reach for him, but then she pulled her hand back, turned on her heels, and walked off.

“That’s it? You’re just going to walk away?” he screamed. She didn’t stop, didn’t even flinch. Jack hung his head. “You’re just going to walk away,” he whispered.

It’s a lot easier to tell readers what’s happening. Kate’s sad. Jack has a broken heart because Kate left him. But when you show readers what’s happening through imagery and dialogue, they can enter the scene and become part of it. This makes reading an experience, and it helps readers connect on an emotional level.

Getting Emotional

Readers who are emotionally invested in a piece of writing are more likely to keep turning pages, to tell their friends about it, and to read more of your work. It doesn’t matter which emotions you engage; make readers feel something — anything — and they will reward you, because the experience you gave them was rewarded.

Do you incorporate emotions into your writing? Do you use imagery and dialogue to do it? What techniques and methods have you used to help readers connect emotionally with your work? Share your thoughts and experiences by leaving a comment, and keep writing.


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About Melissa Donovan
Melissa Donovan is a website designer and copywriter. She writes fiction and poetry and is the founder and editor of Writing Forward, a blog packed with creative writing tips and ideas.


16 Responses to “How to Engage Readers with Emotionally Charged Writing”

  1. Nasir says:

    Thanks for the tips Miss!

  2. brinda says:

    this TRULY helped!
    i was supposed to write an emotionally stirring story while listening to certain music clips…and was really lost. This really really helped me get started = )

  3. Telling vs showing is something my writing groups began pounding into my head from day one. Of couse, it took months for me to grasp it. I found it a bit easier to spot when I realized that the majority of “telling” contains “was,” just as in your examples above.
    I also recently (well, last night!) learned that emotional attachment can still be lacking. I wrote a short story about a man who cares for his mother until she dies of breast cancer. Twenty years later, he’s dying of the same disease and, yet, most everyone got to the end and felt, “and so?” The emotional attachment to him wasn’t strong enough. So much for one critic saying “there’s a sparseness to his writing that is refreshing.” LOL!
    Always learning, always learning… and I find your blog (and book, BTW) to be a huge help.

    • It took me a while too, but that was mostly because I kept hearing “show, don’t tell” without an example or any further explanation. I think if the author can connect emotionally with the character, then the reader will too. When I develop characters, if I don’t absolutely love or loathe them, I kick them to curb!

  4. Jesse Byron says:

    Even though I had the whole ‘show and don’t tell’ in back of my mind from reading, I haven’t had it explained clearly to me until today. ‘Preciate it!

  5. Mike Cairns says:

    Hey Melissa
    Great post, thanks
    I normally write fantasy, so it’s a nice change to write in the real world. Bringing depth of emotion into fantasy is one of my aims, so thanks for the tips.

  6. joan connolly says:

    Thank you for those tips the image was so clear. one could almost see her walk away and him wipe the tears away I can see what show not tell means now

  7. Samuel Oladele says:

    Thanks for these tips.

  8. Nisha says:

    Great tips, Thanks for sharing!