Most writers are primarily concerned with the meaning of the words they choose. Is the language precise and accurate? Do the words provide the best connotation for what the writer is trying to communicate? Does the language show, rather than tell?
But poets take language a step further and push it into the realm of music. Poets care about meaning, precision, and accuracy as well as connotation and imagery. But they also care about how words sound, because musicality is a fundamental feature of poetry.
Poets use various elements of music to compose a poem. But because the written word is read and not heard, some elements of music aren’t available, like pitch and timbre.
Spoken word and performance (or slam) poetry are exceptions, because these works are designed to be heard and can incorporate musical elements that aren’t available to authors who write to be read. But most poets rely on a variety of literary devices and techniques to bring music to their work. Foremost among these are meter, sound, rhyme, repetition, and structure.
Meter (Rhythm)
In poetry, meter is a syllabic pattern, which is determined by stressed and unstressed syllables. We’ll use bold to denote stressed syllables in the first line of “What Kind of Times Are These” by Adrienne Rich:
There’s a place between two stands of trees where the grass grows uphill
Let’s see what happens when we strip away the language, so we can see the raw meter of the line:
da-da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM da-da DUM DUM da-DUM
As you can see, the meter gives the poem rhythm, an underlying drumbeat. This demonstration shows why it’s important to review the syllables in the lines of your poetry to check the meter.
Sound (Melody)
A song’s melody is determined by the sequence and length of notes played or sung by musicians. In poetry, melody is driven by the vowel and consonant sounds within the words of the poem. Consider this simple tune: la de-da, la de-da, la-la-la.
Now compare it to this: doo-da, doo-da, doo-de-da.
We don’t know the exact notes or melody just from reading these sounds, but there is an implied tune when we read them aloud. We can bring a little rhythm to the sounds as well by placing stress on select syllables:
LA de-da, LA de-da, LA-LA-LA.
DOO-da, DOO-da, DOO-de-DA.
So how do we put it all together? By choosing words that match the melody and meter that we’re aiming for:
LA de-da, LA de-da, LA-LA-LA.
On the dock, six o’clock, stomp on rockDOO-da, DOO-da, DOO-de-DA.
Stooping, drooping, boorish king
You’ll notice that in addition to rhythm and meter, we introduced some rhymes.
Rhyme
The most common rhymes are perfect end rhymes — words that appear at the end of lines in poetry and that rhyme perfectly. Here’s an example from Dr. Seuss’s The Lorax (aff link):
Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot
Nothing is going to get better, it’s not.
The words lot and not rhyme perfectly and are placed at the end of the first two lines, respectively. The placement of rhyme in a poem, coupled with its meter, can give the lines a sing-song quality. We can use different meters, sounds, and rhyme placements to pull different musical qualities into our poetry. Here’s an excerpt from “Spelling” by Margaret Atwood, which shows internal rhymes:
At the point where language falls away
from the hot bones, at the point
where the rock breaks open and darkness
flows out of it like blood, at
the melting point of granite
Try reading these lines aloud to hear the inherent music contained within. Notice that the lines do not use a metrical pattern, but the layered internal rhymes give it rhythm:
- away and breaks
- hot and rock
- bones, open, and flows
- The word point appears three times in these five lines, but the repetition of this word is barely noticeable.
It’s worth noting that some poems don’t rhyme at all. Rhyme is important in poetry, but it’s actually a subset of a broader and even more important poetic device that is essential in both poetry and music: repetition. After all, rhyme is just repetition of sounds.
Repetition
Repetition is the technique that really sums up how we make music out of words in poetry. All of the techniques mentioned above ultimately use repetition:
- We create a pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables — and a pattern is really just repetition.
- We choose words and arrange them in such a way that they create a pseudo melody, which is achieved primarily by patterning (or repeating) certain sounds.
- And we use rhyme — maybe end rhymes that ring like cymbals or internal rhymes that jingle like a tambourine. Rhymes are, by nature, repetition.
Layering the repetitions of these elements creates greater musical dynamics in a poem.
As you can see, a poem’s musicality really comes from the repetition of various elements within the lines and stanzas. And there are more elements that we can repeat. Alliteration is the repetition of consonant sounds in close proximity: prickly pears. Assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds in close proximity: hat rack.
Some poems even use repetition in their very structure.
Structure
A poem’s music also comes from its structure — the length of lines and stanzas, placement of line and stanza breaks, punctuation, and spacing. All of these elements contribute to the poem’s structural sounds and therefore contribute to its musicality.
In music, a rest is an interval of silence. In poetry, these intervals are indicated by line breaks, stanza breaks, punctuation, and spacing. Rests are similar to the concept of white space in art.
For example, punctuation provides indicators for pausing (or resting) with commas and periods or inflections for questions and exclamations.
Do You Make Music with Poetry?
Plenty of excellent works of poetry aren’t especially musical. But musicality is an important aspect of poetry.
How do you infuse your poetry with music?
Thank you so much! You made everything very clear. I enjoy poetry best when it “makes music”.
Me too. Thanks, Pat.
I think I agree with you. To me, the rhythm didn’t sound quite right, but until you mentioned the extra word, I couldn’t fathom what it was.
But far be it from me to criticise Adrienne Rich.
I have played drums for over 50 years and it shows in much of my ooetry. It almost comes naturally, but your explanations of different forms make it much clearer. Thank you for explaining the different techniques and using understandable examples.
Thanks for your kind words, Walt. I’m glad you found this helpful.
My son is a musician, professor, and a poet. Intuitively, we know it fits: Perfect pitch, and perfectly pitched words. 🙂
My rather strange mind keeps wanting to interject another word into this sentence: “There’s a place between two stands of trees where the grass grows (green) uphill. It must be the dyslexic mind’s eye.
I think knowing a little about music can definitely benefit one’s poetry writing!
I try to convey the rythym of my poems, and always rewrite to achieve the effect I want, and recite the lines aloud. Sometimes I wonder, though, if the intended flow of the lines gets through to the reader in the way that I want them to. Poets and writers will tend to have a feeling for poetry as they read it, but casual readers may miss the nuances. How do others handle this concern?
I do the same thing for rhythm! Not with every poem, but with many of them. It would be fun to have someone read our poems to see how they interpret the rhythm and flow. I’m not sure that it’s a concern we need to handle as poets. We do our work and put it out into the world when we feel it’s ready. What the reader gets from it (or how they read it) is out of our hands at that point.
A great writing exercise is to pick a song, play the song, and then write a poem on what thoughts the song ett provokes. It’s also good to pick a song from a music genre that you normally wouldn’t listen to.
Thank you for your awesome tips!
That’s a fun exercise. You can do a lot with poetry and music. Keep writing!
Where do I find a musician for my numerous poems
Hi Brenda. I wish I could help, but your question is outside my expertise. Check with your local music stores.
I think that your point about music in poetry, and the musicians who have commented indicate how important it is to consider the musicality in both rhythm and words used.
But I think that rhythm is the most important.
I find much modern poetry lacks rhythm, and although many such poems are beautifully poetic, with the lack of rhythm, they sound just like lovely prose.
I agree, I’ve been told that heavy rhyming is outdated in poems. It is so unfortunate.
I’ve never paid much attention to what’s trendy in poetry. I say just write what you want.